Images of the massive twister ripping through Washington
tore at my heart because Gautam’s phone was
still unreachable.
All the special moments we shared was playing
continuously in my mind, making me yearn to hear his voice one more time, to
breathe in his warmth just one last time.
How I wish I had not fought with him the last time he had called,
how much I wish the person who made my days brighter with his laughter and loving
presence, was safe.
“Sweetheart…You are acting like your best friend just died,”
cried a voice behind me and instantly tears of relief started pouring out from
my eyes.
Later while we happily snuggled closer to each other on the
couch, watching another one of those thriller movies he loved to watch, I thanked
providence for urging him to take that earlier flight out of Washington to
surprise his furious wife.
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its better to appologise wen v stil hav tym than to live wid a lifetym of regeret! good one preeti :-)
ReplyDeleteRightly said.... Thanks for visiting Swathi Shenoy...
DeleteNice story, Preethi! Happy ending. But, sometimes it's too late to make amends. May we all live every moment happily.
ReplyDeleteI donno..May be because I am a newbie ,I cannot make my characters suffer... I am a sucker for happy endings...
DeleteThank you Anita for the encouragement..
Great story! And very nicely told.
ReplyDeleteThank you Beloo :)
DeleteOh! Just 5 sentences! But, still it has all the qualities of a detailed story... Good one Preethi :)
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Sindhu
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The Arts & Me
Thank you Sindhu :)
DeleteI am a firm believer of second chances and of not fighting!
ReplyDeleteMe too :)
DeleteAww happy ending! I normally do not write stories that have happy endings (cos I feel they are too obvious and unreal - will do a whole post exploring this sentence shortly!) but this one was well structured! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteGood one Preethi, it's incidents like the storm in the story that reminds us how precious the people in our lives are. Nicely narrated in 5 sentences :)
ReplyDeleteYes indeed Prasanna. Thanks for dropping by.
DeleteThis was beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Shrishti :)
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